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11/6/10

Virtuous Smirtuous

BERJAYA
Stunning, striking,
and other words
that conjure violence
as flattery
suit her.
A sharp tongue
and wit that insinuates
pain and survival 
imply a proximal safety 
waiting to go awry.

Misunderstanding the risk, 
my hand imagines
pulling her supple midriff
to my own,
an act
which could only cause 
a clandestine incident
to ensue.
With disheveled hair 
that I could eat 
framing her poignant features, 
irregular smiles as reward 
find my own lips
hungry for a taste.

It's not the normal niceties 
that conjure the sight
of her imperfect teeth, 
but rather my accidental kinks, 
those others find peculiar
or even uncomfortable, 
that bring us closer
to each other,
connect us.

Were it that
it did not end here,
more I could tell you
of love, desire, companionship,
but being in my head
and heart
as it is,
a reality
still not unfurled,
this remains in the ideal,
pristine,
hence
improbable.

6 comments:

David Barber said...

I'm not really a poetry man, Freida, but I liked that. Nice write!

Regards, David.

Freida Bee, MD said...

Thank you, David. That's kind of you to say!

Lisa said...

Oh girlfrand. This is very intriguing.

darkblack said...

'eating hair'...Hmm, it must be serious.

;>)

Randal Graves said...

Your stuff always has, whether overt or subtle, a swanky edge to it, but I'm not jealous, swear.

Freida Bee, MD said...

Lisa- meow

DarkOne- I just have a good imagination, ie. this was about a straight lady I know, so not serious. But, I did meet someone I find most fetching the very next day. If you build the poem, she will, er, come? Still, wishful.

Randal- You know it's hard to write erotica without having it sound like bad porn, and it's hard to write lovey poetry without sounding like a 16 year-old girl with big bubble handwriting, so thanks. Swanky is like my life's ambition, but oftentimes skanky has to suffice. ;)